Archangel's Kiss by Nalini Singh

Title: Archangel's Kiss

Author: Nalini Singh

Genre: Urban Fantasy

Series: Guild Hunter # 2

323 pages, Paperback

Publication: February 1, 2010

Source: Personal Library

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Vampire hunter Elena Deveraux wakes from a year-long coma to find herself changed—an angel with wings the colors of midnight and dawn—but her fragile body needs time to heal before she can take flight. Her lover, the stunningly dangerous archangel Raphael, is used to being in control—even when it comes to the woman he considers his own. But Elena has never done well with authority…

They’ve barely begun to understand each other when Raphael receives an invitation to a ball from the archangel Lijuan. To refuse would be a sign of fatal weakness, so Raphael must ready Elena for the flight to Beijing—and to the nightmare that awaits them there. Ancient and without conscience, Lijuan holds a power that lies with the dead. And she has organized the most perfect and most vicious of welcomes for Elena…

MY THOUGHTS

Archangel’s Kiss picks up exactly where Angels' Blood ended. Elena, the guild hunter, has been reborn as an angel and is just waking up from her coma. She now has to rebuild her strength and learn what it means to be immortal. As word of Elena’s condition spreads among angelkind, one of the Cadre members, Lijuan, throws a ball in her honor. Except someone seems determined to make sure Elena never makes it there, and everyone suspects Lijuan is behind the attacks.

One of my biggest issues with the first book was Raphael. I thought he was cringe in Angels' Blood, but he’s even worse in this one. Most of the book is just Elena and Raphael being extremely cringey together. All they do is think and talk about sex and of course, actually do the deed… nonstop. Elena acted like an animal in heat, which was gross, and then I had to sit through Raphael repeatedly telling her he couldn’t have sex with her yet because what he wanted to do to her would be too rough and might break or kill her. It made me want to barf every time it came up. To make things worse, Elena has nightmares about her family being attacked, and the only thing that soothes her is, you guessed it, sex.

There was barely any plot. The first 78% of the book was all of that, with maybe 1% of Elena training to fight and fly, and another 1% spent hunting a killer. The numbers might be exaggerated, but that’s genuinely how it felt.

The story and any semblance of a plot don’t actually show up until after the 80% mark, when Raphael and Elena arrive in Beijing for the ball. I did enjoy seeing the key players and getting page time with characters we only heard about before, like Jason, Nazarach, and Neha. The best part of the book was probably the final scenes and Illium, he’s funny without even trying.

I really tried to give this series a chance and hoped I would enjoy the second book more, but sadly, I didn’t. This book was mostly smut with no plot, and I need actual substance in my reading. With that said, I will not be continuing the series.

Jade City by Fonda Lee

Title: Jade City

Author: Fonda Lee

Genre: Urban Fantasy

Series: The Green Bone Saga # 1

529 pages, Paperback

Publication: November 17, 2017

Source: Libby Library

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The Kaul family is one of two crime syndicates that control the island of Kekon. It's the only place in the world that produces rare magical jade, which grants those with the right training and heritage superhuman abilities.

The Green Bone clans of honorable jade-wearing warriors once protected the island from foreign invasion--but nowadays, in a bustling post-war metropolis full of fast cars and foreign money, Green Bone families like the Kauls are primarily involved in commerce, construction, and the everyday upkeep of the districts under their protection.

When the simmering tension between the Kauls and their greatest rivals erupts into open violence in the streets, the outcome of this clan war will determine the fate of all Green Bones and the future of Kekon itself.

MY THOUGHTS

I’ve had Jade City on my TBR for years. The premise always intrigued me; an urban setting with gangs and magical jade… interesting, right?

The beginning started off strong with a memorable scene where a couple of teenagers try to steal jade from a Green Bone member. As expected, it goes awry, which leads to the Kaul family realizing someone is encroaching on their turf. To be quite honest, the magic system felt too vague, too simple, or just confusing to fully grasp at the start, at least for me. From what I gathered, only certain bloodlines are able to wield magical jade, which grants them enhanced strength. But even after finishing the book, I’m still not entirely sure what their magical abilities actually were. They all fought with blades or guns, so it felt a bit muddled. I guess I expected something more overtly magical. And if you’re not from the right bloodline, jade makes you sick and can eventually kill you. Each syndicate scouts for those with the right lineage to build their ranks.

Most of the characters felt bland; no one truly stood out or made a lasting impression. I never connected with any of them, and for most of the book, I felt pretty impassive toward their struggles. The only character who briefly grabbed my attention was Shae, the sole prominent female and the reluctant Kaul family member. I thought the writing itself was well done, but the story just didn’t hold my interest. There were a few standout scenes, but they were far between, and the pacing dragged in the gaps. Two moments were clearly meant to be major turning points, but they ended up feeling anticlimactic, especially the final fight.

Jade City was a decent read, but I don’t think I’ll be rushing to pick up the second book anytime soon, if at all.